Winter's Birds Return To Spring

Translucent skies fade to clear

as winter's birds return to spring

climbing higher as they soar

riding thermals in a west-ward sloop

till each and all fade away.

A sky of blue, says the eye

But look again and see them fly.

Reviews

[deeps]

This is wonderful Cherrie, Ever so lovely and touching as well.

[Vinod Kumar U K]

......Towards the autumn.. nice flow

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The eyes can play tricks on the mind depending on our mood. That was a fun interesting read.

[.......]

Well it is wonderful so far.
Love it : )

[Moflo]

Love it. Great poem for the change of seasons, reminded me kinda of Derek Walcott. Nice inspiring piece!