Hearts Afire

a pledge

I fall into your emotions & leap into your gaze.

I long for your knowing  & your soul leaves me amazed.

I ponder your expressions & measure by your smile.

Now return to me my longing and let’s set our hearts afire.

Reviews

[Cassie]

Or rather set our passion on fire..this is good

[?]

oooooooooh I like this one. Love the flow
Short but packed.
Loved the ending, such a perfect title, ending and complete poem of romance and passion.

[madmocha]

You specialize in pith. ;) Short, concise... and potent. I liked this one. It touches the intellect, but caresses es the emotions.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love these words of romance!

[Becky C Strukamp]

A very sweet poem. A real good feel good! Well penned. Sometimes it takes only but a few words to express big feelings. Excellent!