Dream All The More

I wrote this for a contest a new twist on something old

By purest dark or day so bright

 With thoughts entwined or no

Is our past any less gone?

 

With all we share and with the words we bear

We dream just a little bit more.

 

 

I boldly say, in the midst of the horde

That in tomorrow I have no fear

For hand in hand

We shall survey this land

And dream all the more.

Reviews

[BriAnna Wyble]

the way this flows is beautiful. i love this, i admire your talent :)

[Gomer LePoet]

this has the feel of a sweet version of a Poe piece. it floats like a butterfly!

[Ed Hart]

'is all that we see or seem/but a dream within a dream' poe