High School Love 101

You’re just a kid

And I’m just a girl

Two crazy people

Out to change the world

 

I would write you every word
If it would make you see
That she’s not the one for you

And that you belong with me

 

But even if I shined it in your face
There’s no way you’d see the light
She has got you blinded, boy

And there’s no use to fight.

 

I knew I was doomed to lose
Before I even started
And now I’ll never have you
I’ll just sit here broken-hearted

Reviews

[John Moran]

This reminds me of my various high school romances. Quite sad. The rhyme scheme is simple but it works well. Good write.

[Rachel DeHart]

"You're just a kid
And I'm just a girl
Two crazy people
Out to change the world

I would write you every word
If it would make you see
That she's not the one for you
And that you belong with me"

I love those first two stanza's.
Such a great flow and so much power behind it all. :]

[Mistral Bilgera]

wow... this is very much like high school love!! got me feeling nostalgic. :)

such a short but heartfelt piece. keep em coming :)