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She is so damm hot 

I suck on her soft wet lips

She moans quietly 

Reviews

[Jibey]

The s sounds create a pleasing assonance that is so right for this sensual sucking...

[Dahlia Phoenix]

I'm guessing you were going for a haiku. Its simple but I'm guessing you're trying to make the reader create an imagery of their own when they read this. Good poem even if short.