Mother

I have this image in my head

A hug and a long conversation 

Mother imagine with me

who I would be

if you had loved me

Reviews

[Érenn]

This is such a powerful poem. Less is more, yeah those are words I have started to like a lot more in recent times. This was a very touching poem, short crisp yet the punch delivered can move one's heart. I might not be able to relate to it in any manner, but I could still feel your pain, even if it was slight.

[Jacob Clifford]

Oh, dang. This is short, but it hits home. You managed to have a build up in so little - well done. This has particular resonance with me; I often have thoughts of this nature directed toward my father.