Broken

Take these lonely hands,
And unleash them in your heart.
Swear to these soaking eyes,
That we'll never fall apart.

Kiss these silenced lips,
And breath in my lust.
Rest assure my worried mond,
That its you that I can trust.

Rock me,
Gently.
Hold me,
Tightly.
Please don't lose your grip.
With both arms,
Surround me.
With your love,
you've found me.
Please don't let me slip.

Reviews

[Devan McKinley]

Thank you, everyone haha

[An owl on the moon]

Devan, this is such a beautiful longing of the heart... a heart that has been scarred and broken... left in tears and anguish... now calling for one who will love and protect... Oh, if each one of us could find such arms to fall into.

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

I really liked the first 2 stanzas, then I found I lost the powerful sense of the reality when the phrasing completely changed.

It was a good exploration of vulnerability, I find.

[Mockingbird]

you can feel the intensity of her love for him. almost sounds insecure and needs reassurance that he would never leave her. great piece.