Say Goodbye

From a time in my life I swore I would never go back to. . .

It ends tonight, the dream is done.

No more laughing, no more fun.

I tried so hard, I fought it all.

But now I have begun to fall.

I'm sick of all the lies and pain.

My blood will spill, a crimson rain.

The time has come. This is the end.

To you my reader, foe or friend,

I wish you luck and may you fair

better than I, who ceased to care.

So say goodbye to me right here

Before at last I disappear. . .

Author's Note

Venting. . .

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was very nicely written. I understand how you were feeling when you wrote this. Trust me. I feel like this a lot. I want some people to say goodbye to me at times. I liked this. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Steve]

Well i hope you dont disappear....i like your writing styel

[TTBoy28]

The rhythm in this write was incredible. Wow, you kept a rhythm with preparing to end it all...amazing!

[Syldor]

This is a wonderfully strong poem, the rhyming is clear and precise. I love it.

[alesuriko]

I like the rhyme of this one and the flow is good too. Nice imagery and good expression of emotion.

~~Arra~~

[Nathan Durham]

I liked this. It was a well written expression of powerful feelings.