what do you mean doesnt make sense? to me it makes perfect sense. i come from a town were to be popular you need to play sport and be like the "cool" kids and if you were popular you were normal i always be myself and i am definetly NOT popular. i related to this well and i really like it. what is normal? ive thought about it and always came up with the same answer you have
I agree with you. Too many robots in this world. We must hold on to our dreams and goals. A well written poem and you made a statement for the free spirits and dreamers. A outstanding poem.
Coyote
Well done- bravo- kudos. This poem really speaks my language and cuts straight through the sensless din of conformity. Very well said, take care, spence
Makes a heck of a lot of sense to me ^_^
A truly insightful and excellent piece.
It flowed well, along with projecting a strong message!
Good job //_^)
10/10