Falling

A short poem I wrote about wanting someone to rely on.

Falling

Her wings are broken

For honesty has spoken

Left her with scars that speak words of isolation

Bruised her wings from desperation

Her only desire is someone to hold her

To catch her

Reviews

[Bowers]

beautifully heartbreaking, how we yearn to be caught dont we, love heavy on young hearts... great thought provoking write!

[Lisa Bland]

Gret poem. I think we all need someone to rely on. Could relate to every word

[Chloe_Spence]

Thank you very much Lisa :)

[Luna Zerimar]

The cravings...The cravings.

Gosh, this was short, but true.

[Chloe_Spence]

Thank you Jessica :)

[Luna Zerimar]

You're welcome.

[Madalyn Beck]

We all crave someone to be there to catch us when we feel as if we're falling apart. A steady hand to reach out and hold us. This is a simple and beautiful write. xo (:

[Chloe_Spence]

Thank you Madalyn, you are so sweet :)

[Jennie Baron]

It says so much that I can relate to in just a few well-chosen words. Very well done.

[Chloe_Spence]

Thank you so much, Jennie :)

[Chloe_Spence]

You are too kind Jennie, your words are greatly appreciated :)

[AprilRN1210]

Delicate pieces that should be cherished sometimes get crushed and broken by careless others.. This is beautifully written... I think we all deep down want someone to hold us sometimes to be cherished and understood:)

[Chloe_Spence]

Thank you so much, you are so kind :)

[AprilRN1210]

You are very welcome

[melissa]

Sad poem but you did amazing job writing this poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them

[Chloe_Spence]

Melissa you are so kind :) Thank you very much :)

[melissa]

Your welcome

[Oswald Chesterfield Cob..]

Very sad :( I can feel your pain. I'm here if you ever need someone to talk to, anytime you want :)

[Chloe_Spence]

Thank you Harley's Joker, although this was written about a friend of mine :)
Thank you for the kind words though :)

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

You are very welcome :)