The Frog

my first poem, when I was 6

As I was riding my bike down the road
I thought I spied a baby toad.
He was hopping carefully across the street
And I accidentally rode over his feet.

He croaked so loud, I felt so bad
I carried him home feeling very sad.
He ate some cookies and drank some milk
And that night he slept on sheets of silk.

Reviews

[Cortana]

That's fantastic.
I was not so blessed with creative talent at that age.
Well done six year old you.

[Baz]

Very nice. Reminds my of the Brothers Grimm or some old fairytale. Lovely.

[Muse]

Laugh! Great rhyme and humor. If you wrote this at six...I'm seriously impressed! This is better than what some adults can do.

[Revery]

lol, nice. I like it. lite fun poems are needed here. Great job.

I missed that you wrote this at 6, that makes it even better.