Shades of Green

bountiful bliss
vibrant and warm
pastures
meadows
alive and clean
swirling scent

delightful depth
bright and sweet
eyes
Oh!
Your eyes!
mesmerizing and bold
glittering gaze

Reviews

[dontwakeme]

simple yet bold

[Revery]

The rush of being smitten is like being dizzy with imagery and senses. I at first found myself looking for rhymes been then a paid attention to the meter and realized it was self contained. The thought conveyed is strong and complex in depth.

[SuicidePact.]

LOVE IT!!

and its really cool how its actually green ahaha