This Cup Of Tea

This cup of tea

is not for me

I was told

to then

"quit drinking"

 

This cup of tea

is so sweet to me

I was told

to then

"quit thinking"

 

This cup of tea

is cold to me

I was told

to then

"quit feeling"

 

This cup of tea

is now empty

I was told

then

"your overcoming."

 

Reviews

[Taylor H]

i agree with a. stopher
this is a very interesting peice of writing

[deactivated account. pl..]

wow.
I really like this.
the last line is so good, I love everything in qoutations - I love that in poetry, when it feels like things are spoken.
So well done.