Craving

I'm craving you.
I know this feeling won't be quenched
Till your lips hit mine
And our bodies intertwine
When your heart beat meets the same rhythm of the pounding in my chest
Our heat will be astronomical yet desirable
I scream give me more
I'm craving you.

Reviews

[M]

i can totally relate to this feeling and its so real. good job expressing this.

[Adam Adams]

Quite fascinating ... I like how evocatively you make this poetry so witty reading & full of your intriguing love ... short yet simplistic; thoughtful yet manifested ... beautiful write.