Green Eyes

I remember those beautiful green eyes,

the ones that look at you as though you were the most

beautiful person in the world,

as if I were everything to them,

sometimes i think they are blind,

I close my eyes, and see the

peircing green eyes, and I miss them.

CMS(H)

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Eyes are the true windows to the soul.. here you show a great memory connected to missing the soul that made you feel so special.. it's so nice when another can lift us in such a way that places us on a pedestal.. very nicely written! I miss many eyes.. my father's, my grandparents and so many old friends that brought me happiness in the past. Then I remember that the souls behind those eyes helped make me who I am today.. some were meant to be in passing.. and they are all still very much a big part of me inside! You captured a radiance in a feature that really strikes me as well! Short and simple.. but really beautiful essence!

[Liza]

green is the color of nature
the color of energy
the color of healing

these greens eyes seemed to spark a natural feeling within you, an energetic field to move you and heal you...

hold onto those green eyes

[Liz Alexander]

Green eyes a beautifull thing

[Aimee Mahathy]

Isn't it amazing that certain images can be burnt into our memory forever; and that though we haven't seen them in years, they return to us as vividly as though we'd seen them only moments before? The memory is a powerful thing. And it's frightening how many ghosts it can hold. We can be haunted very often by memories of the past, even those that were happy.
Great poem!

[Rainey]

simply lovely, and so tender. nice one :)

Sweet, well written poem. I love your expression how you are able to place so much on one thing and get a powerful point across. The eyes are he windows to the soul.

[FireFly15]

I love green eyes :] Very good write.

[Alz Alz]

Beautiful poem. I like the style, it was very entrancing. I could really visualize the eyes... 10/10

[Theresa]

It's beautifully sad. The longing, the desire, the heartache it's all displayed in a few lines. I like the last three words: I miss them, it sums it up.

[Missing Part]

Thank's for the comments. i consider theem very strongly.

[Abhinav]

piercing green eyes.......haha,i know them well..anyways,it was a beautiful poem,showing the longing and desire you have for someone,and i can also relate to this...loved it!....tarr for addin'