Heart attack

A pulsing beat through

Satan's own river

Of sweet red wine

Promptly frozen

The rhythm brought to

Sleep under a curtain

Of icy peace

Gently ticking still

In the human clock

Reviews

[Celestial Witch Child]

WOW. This is utterly amazing. Great usage of metaphors.

[Alicia Beavis]

Interesting piece and lovely use of imagery!