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The end is near. Are you prepared? This short narrative poem talks about the failure of men on various aspects of life.

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Author's Note

This is a short narrative poem. Intrested parties can always ask me to summarize the poem. Thank you.

Reviews

[Mazie]

Very interesting, and a different style than what I am personally used to; therefore I may not be the best critic, but I am glad you added the description at the top! It makes the message very clear and very meaningful. Definitely food for thought, I like it :) It is short and straight to the point!

[Chubatemsu kichu]

Thank you so much for your comments Craziwriter ;-)

[Mazie]

no problem , my pleasure :)

[TL Boehm]

Time never flies. It disappears. It will.
Heaven harvests.

Wise words in this succinct write

[Valentine]

Good message and I pray mote people heed it. Life is too short to live unhappily . It really is not hard to live a good life if one tries. Valentine

[Chubatemsu kichu]

Yes, very true :D. Thank you .

[ANTO]

Theres quite a lot in this small poem -
"No limitations for evil but for good. " - so true - you captured the injustice that is rife in this day and age.

Its an intense poem but thats what this kind of 'wake up stupid' poem needs to have - intensity.
Good one Chuba

[Chubatemsu kichu]

Im glad you liked it. Thank you brother.

[Lauriegirl]

this is exceptional. I just love this write.

[Chubatemsu kichu]

Really! never thought it would be good. Thanks laurie.

[Wynter Ignatius]

Reminds me of my own chaotic thoughts to it makes sense to me on that level.

A wonderful piece here.

[Chubatemsu kichu]

Thank you so much. :-)