Patience

Dedicated to every man who face problems and obstacles . The outcome of this pain is peace.

Life! Nothing harder.
Struggles for every breath.
Challanged by the day.
Threatened by the dark.
Tempted by our vision.
Will this end?

Patience! A peace awaits.
A peace for all.
For every being that suffers,
Sacrifice, struggles for survival.
As God is just.

Author's Note

Though its not upto the standard of any poetry readers and not imaginative please bear with it. Open for questions and criticism.

Reviews

[The Black Warrior]

WOW again, amazing... very profound work!

Tempted by our vision.
Will this end?

^^some times I believe it is better to be blind than to see... as Paul was blinded :D

But we all have to learn to see through the eyes of faith not by our physical eyes.

Nicely penned :DD

[Chubatemsu kichu]

Very true . Your comments encourages me to write more. Thank you mu h.

[The Black Warrior]

You are very welcome :))

[little thoughts]

it is very good writing. the message which you have given is very inspiring ! well done

[Chubatemsu kichu]

Thank you so much. :-)

[Kayja Symphious]

True. It might not be the most imaginative, but the message is timeless. One that humans forget all too often. Because of that, it is always worth repeating.

[Chubatemsu kichu]

Ya very true :-)