Faith

We often lose faith in God's love, his arms that protects us, his mercy that deter us from eternal pain. May a better "FAITH" in Christ lead us to divinity.

Faith in christ, supreme and everlasting,

Contrives the rill of joy and fasting. 

Faith in love, foes vaunt with laughter, 

As trothed by thy Father.

Faith in Wisdom, conceive Eden's blessing,

Divine knowledge no end to specing. 

Faith in life, God's grandeur in glaring sight,

Ten orders detering the destined blight.

Faith in spirit, your own and his, 

Tristles the boulevard to cheerio and bliss. 

Faith in prayer,unlax contrite thru recur admission,

Of one's weakness and erroneous sensation.

Resilient verity to inverse disdain, 

Faith in christ unshakles restraints.

Author's Note

Open to questions,corrections and criticisms.

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

Well, I'm a Christian but this struggle is not easy for me. I write about faith but I still trip. So I found this poem personally relatable. Well done. Especially that last line. Right on the target there.

[Chubatemsu kichu]

Thank you so much Boehm. May God bless you.

[Jamestown]

Fantastic write, loved it from top to bottom! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Chubatemsu kichu]

Thank you so much james. May God bless you!

[Valentine]

I admire your faith, and being only 17, your word expressions are fine. Valentine

[Chubatemsu kichu]

Thank you valentine, You're review was quite encouraging. :D

[MomzillaNC]

Amen. Your dénouement is stunning: "Faith in Christ unshackles restraints."

NOTES: I agree with Fabian G. Franklin's notes.

[Chubatemsu kichu]

Thank you .aMay God blsss you.

[MomzillaNC]

yw and GBY

[The Black Warrior]

WOOOOOOW hahah this is amazing!!! completely beautiful!!! haven't read anything like it :DD

Faith in Christ unshackles restraints.

^^^ LOVED THIS
nicely done :)))

[Chubatemsu kichu]

Glad you liked it!
Thank you much.

[The Black Warrior]

You are very welcome :D

[ALee]

I Love it. Especially the last line. So True!

[Chubatemsu kichu]

Really. Aww thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the positive feel and energy in the poem. Thank you for sharing the amazing poem for faith.
Coyote

[Chubatemsu kichu]

My pleasure. Thank you.