DAWN

This is a song that just came to me hope you enjoy it!! I think that if it was ever sung it d have more of an Indie rock theme like Kings and queens by 30seconds to mars

Chorus: Cuz at DAWN when the light comes through shining bright. Feel the DAWN its a sight for our eyes to make last night right. We'll fight through the DAWN and into the night. Lets reach new Heights with the DAWN in our sights.

 

Verse: Last night it was frightning  there was pride feeling rising.

I kept trying to breathe and someone cried a final plea.

I was suddenly set free and as i climbed the highest tree i saw the dawn and it saw me

 

Chorus 2X

 

Verse: I wont look back I'll stay on track follow me to a place where nothing will go to waste. It's time to face what we have not yet. I'm ready for this battle there will be this infamous shadow others will follow I will lead. It wont take an army to succeed

 

Bridge: He told me one night. That I wont put up a good fight. I couldnt fight him off That he would take me back.

 

Chorus 1X

 

Verse: I ran into the dawn ready to stand strong others stood behind me ready to defend. There was fire in his eyes burning fast and bright. i stared into those eyes knowing I would win. Knowing that DAWN was on my side knowing i would stand to fight again

 

Chorus 2X

 

Author's Note

Is this any good and should i change the I's to We's?? Yea and i love the picture IDK if Its dawn or dusk though just thought it went along with the lyrics.

Reviews

[c.m.]

Well, here's the thing. There's so many typo's it's actually hard to read, so I would go through and fix those. And, sadly, this wonderful picture you speak of doesn't show up!
Anyway....I like it. The chorus is catchy and good...I like it, fix the typo's and Imay like it more. Good work.