Lets take a f*****g walk

Im still getting over it.

Lets take a f*****g walk

I'll show you what you've done

The streets of all your lies

The avenues of my cries

 

Lets take a f*****g walk

I'll show you what you've done

The mansions where you lay at night

The shacks of my heart torn apart

 

Lets take a f*****g walk

I'll show you what you've done

The times square where you play your games

The Ally where a stronger me resides

 

Lets Take a f*****g walk

The plaza where you dont matter

Broadway where glass shatters with applause for me

Did you enjoy our walk? 

 

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Your honest, gripping metaphor plays out in the mind... striking deep with an emotional anger forged from the pain. So powerfully voiced.

[Frantzuu]

The title dragged me in, Great concept, and awesome poem. :D

[Haifa]

Very great job!

[jawdriscoll]

nice

[Eternal.Dreamer]

I would not enjoy a walk like that, but definitely I enjoyed reading this. As Coyote said-very direct and honest, that is exactly the reason why I like it that much.

[Lydia Blackwell]

Wowza! I love this! Can I send this to my ex??? This is brilliant! Great job. I like :

The Ally where a stronger me resides

yes! Yes it does. And I love this one :

The streets of all your lies
The avenues of my cries

Freaking brilliant! Great job.
(I been walking there before. It's not pretty but you learn a lot....)

[sarah]

whoa! that's intense I think I would like to show my ex this street. Good work!

[Coyote Poetry]

A very direct and honest poem. Someone being honest and pissed solved many problem more quickly. I like the complete poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote