White

This place can be whatever place you want it to be...

White draped over me, shielding me.  From the past, present, and what lied in the future for me.  It took me away from a darkened place from the pain that one can feel, that one can make others feel.  It whispered "You're safe."  Floating high above into the white.  Light as air I can breathe, feel, and sense that pure is what I am once more and happiness is not just a feeling that's in store.  Its the only feeling, that one can feel in this white place.  A place meant for more than just the human race, the soul that lives in it...a soul for this white place.

Reviews

[Sharon]

Nicely done. Great imagery. Great description. It gives the reader a clear and accurate picture of what you mean. Nicely written, "Floating high above into the white. Light as air I can breathe, feel, and sense that pure is what I am once more and happiness is not just a feeling that's in store." Nicely done. Great word choice and organization! :)

[Chyla]

thank you so much Sharihe I'm glad you liked it :)

[Sharon]

Your welcome. I really enjoyed it!