Bleeding

I don't know how to describe this, other then just say that i was really tired and depressed and it was,like, four in the morning.

I'll tremble as i pray

The words whispered out so low

Of mistakes I can't admitt

And emotions I can't show

Because what will I do?

When the truth becomes to real

And I can't exscape the past

But I'm still to weak to heal

So I bleed the honest blood

Blood to innocent to shed

All mixed with salty tears

My cold eyes have just bleed

So watch my insides fall

From the outside dripping down

Or slowly building up

From the inside I shall drown

 

Reviews

[Kelsey]

A very touching piece that opens your mind and heart to the soul of the depressed. Something I personally can relate to, and something I really enjoyed - you did a lovely job with this, my dear. :)

[BlondeFox]

thank you very much :) though i'm sad to hear you can relate

[I am renee]

beautiful, you left me speechless

[BlondeFox]

awww, thank you

[I am renee]

your very welcome :)