Life

Life is never easy,
It always has its ups and downs,
I just wish for one day,
My life would be easy,
No fighting,
No crying,
No hurting,
Some day's I just want to be free,
Free like the bird flying high,
Free with no care in the world,
But once again life is never that easy.

Reviews

Another great piece here, I would remove the double negative 'no nothing' as it drags on the poem and effects the flow. Otherwise, great write.

[Eiken]

Clopo, I am new to the site so am just finding my way around. There is a lot of pain expressed in this poem. If you laid it out better on the page, it might read better. I like the content, lots of good lines.


Life is never easy
It has its ups and downs
I just wish for one day
life would be easier
No fighting, no crying
no hurting, no pain.
I just want to be free
Free like the birds
flying high,
free with no cares.
But once again,
live is not that easy.

Hope this is helpful critique. Disregard it if you don't:))