I loved you

I still remember the day we first met,

It was at her house and it had been raining so my hair was all wet and i looked horrible,

You walked through her door and i went really shy,

You said hello to me and i was to shy to say it back,

I swear it was love at first sight,

Well that's what i thought,

 

I remember our first kiss,

Her little brother opened the door and was like their kissing,

I went so shy I cuddled into your arm,

 

I remember when I was falling asleep you held me in your arms,

I didn't want the night to end,

I felt so alive,

 

I remember that night like it was yesterday,

I could never forget it. 

Reviews

[+Kenna Cuddle Bear+]

pretty good but u shouldn't act like ur talking to ur friend when ur writing a poem, act like ur talking to the paper. :)