Circle

Stuck in a circle

Around and around

Always making the

Same decisons

That got us into this circle

This routine of a relationship

This needs to stop

I don't care anymore

Earlier I wanted this circle

To end with us

Happy together

Forever

But lately

I don't care

If you left forever

And we never spoke again

Don't get me wrong

I still love you

And you're still the reason

I smile

But enough is enough

My emotions can't take

This circle

Anymore

Reviews

[A.Pinto]

The emotions in this poem are very heavy and honest like the narrator (either you or your persona) has really thought this through and knows their feeling well. I love the line breaks and slight repetition of some words; they really help strengthen the image of a circle.