Fantasy

Just playing around. My first haiku. :)

Dimpled and handsome

Kissed by the Venetian sun

Dusk - now comes my turn.

Reviews

[Nisreen]

I really like this piece
Very light and happy

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Thank you!

[Usman Muhammad]

This is superb...Well done

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Your kind review is much appreciated!

[iamshadowine]

sweet one! keep writing :D

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Thank you for coming by to read and review! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Awww, this is such a sweet Haiku/Senryu! Nice job.

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Thank you so much!!

[Emily]

Lovely write!
Keep it up!!

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Thank you!

[Shabeeh Haider]

A wonderful haiku. It gives such a wonderful image of what you are trying to convey

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Thank you so much, Shabeeh Haider! I appreciate your kind words.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Most welcome

[GalaxyGhost]

This is just a beautiful haiku! The wonderful thing about a haiku is how it can capture beauty in just a few couple words.

[Cobblestone Traveler]

I'm so glad you like it! Thank you!

[Oliver Free]

Oooh, I really like this! Even though it's a haiku it still manages to paint a wonderful image in my head. Great work!

[Cobblestone Traveler]

:D That means a lot to me! Thank you so much.

[Oliver Free]

Sure! Your poetry is really good.