What has she done to me

I barely know her but shes stuck in my mind
I close my eyes and her face is all I find
I do not know if her appearance has saved or damned
but I know she reminds me who I am

I wish I knew what she intended
with the way my worlds been upended
I wish I could know what is running through her head
when we hold each other in my bed

I could lose myself in her embrace
and find myself in her face
This must be the sweetest of all pains
to fall in love so fast you go insane

What has she done to me
Whatever it is only she holds the key
to free me from this pain so deep

and to give me a heart to keep

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

yes i know the feeling ,love can come really so fast and taking control all over you ,it can be so strong you can hardly move or choose what to do,all you can is just let yourself go ,for its so compelling you can not act at your will and you really stand surprised is this hell or paradise,what power has she on me that she took all control over me,but it sounds nice,of all the pains i felt this is the strongest and so sweet,what has she done to me that she holds the key to all my being ,do i really want to be set free ,but she keeps me warm ,so nice and full of love very strong stormy love

[Clarisse Nanoit]

LOVE THE ENDING NOW! YAY! Great work, my friend. GLAD TO HAVE YOU BACK!

[Clarisse Nanoit]

As I said before I accidentally deleted my review, I absolutely LOVE the feelings you convey so well in this piece. It tells of a sweet love, getting to know each other, but somehow knowing, still that what's happening is just... RIGHT! I think lots of people can relate to this. You know how I feel about the last two lines! :) This COULD be perfect, ya know. :P I kinda hope this poem is true, cause that'd mean you're happy. =D
KH