Fall Morning

A fleeting moment that I had to make an attempt at.

First fall morning

She snuggles into my back

Soul is at peace

Author's Note

I'm terrible with poetry and this is my first attempt at a senryu style format. It seemed that haiku is wonderfully suited to ephemeral moments so I decided to give it a shot.

Reviews

[Ravenskald]

short sweet and very interesting
Not much good at Haiku myself :)
~RAven

[Poeticpiers]

a fine senryu Haikus are concerned with nature and the seasons Senryu with people and emotions
You evoked a vivid mental image freezing a moment in fast frame