oh love

breathe the dawn
oh love.
catch my breath in your hands
i sigh,
oh love.

dew in your hair
the sun, your eyes
the world is
there.

Reviews

[MelissaAndres]

Oh, I really like this. So simple, so pure. You brought up a lot of feeling in just a few short words. Very nice job!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A most subtle and perfect piece, well done, good read.