You know a 6 year old girl was killed in the middle of all that. And he has the audacity to sit there with his orange hair and say nothing, as if he owes nobody anything.
He who judges is never worthy of affording himself that role, and it's awfully sad that he who thinks he has a point to make, makes only a point to say nothing and mean nothing with his empty violence. And then let a child die for it. As if he were God watching as his son were nailed to the cross. And then straight into self-martyrdom, because he were so righteous.
This is so simply written but the complexities lie within the message you are sending out. And I like how you change and drift from very well written, written word/prose to become slightly more colloquial towards the end. It's as if you're digressing from the rational newspaper clipping documenting such an event to being there yourself, retelling the horror.
And I adore the ending. It's your angst and everybody elses, and sums up what is wrong with this capitalist, consumerist world where everybody has to be right, and pretty much, in this day and age, $12 will buy you more than you ever bargained for, and then could very well be the end of you. As if you never knew it was even coming.
We all pay for each others sins, and while most of us dont feel it straight away, you can bet your life on a 6 year old getting shot in the face because of that bad karma. The children always feel are wrath. Always.
You paid for a few hours of unreality. That isn't what you got.And the problem isn't too many guns...the problem is too many of the wrong people with guns...
Well I would sure think you would get your money Back The problem here is simple guns way too many guns.
Posted 13 Years Ago
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13 Years Ago
You know whats funny these people got shot with a GUN so why has buyers market increased for GUNS? W.. read moreYou know whats funny these people got shot with a GUN so why has buyers market increased for GUNS? We say so many guns and their bad but, here we are getting that permit and lock and loading just to take another life.
13 Years Ago
Well there are now only 12 murders in Australia a year they banned guns a while back we have 11,000 .. read moreWell there are now only 12 murders in Australia a year they banned guns a while back we have 11,000 a yr here simple math .More guns is not going to stop this only ending this culture of viciousness will
13 Years Ago
I know, sad part is guns are just second base weapons as the dangers on earth are increased by them... read moreI know, sad part is guns are just second base weapons as the dangers on earth are increased by them.
13 Years Ago
yes you cant stop this violence until the guns are gone
13 Years Ago
in arizona a 18 yr old can buy a ASSAULT RIFLE He can buy as many as he wants .For what i say for wh.. read morein arizona a 18 yr old can buy a ASSAULT RIFLE He can buy as many as he wants .For what i say for what,.There seems to be no way to stop the violence
Right their do you really think were mature enough, not old enough, mature enough to be holding a gu.. read moreRight their do you really think were mature enough, not old enough, mature enough to be holding a gun that could take a life, but, I guess thats as good as its going to get though; what was it 15 16 year boys use knew how to shoot guns like pros. Still hand out of deal out guns just like that, with not clue if that person might have a few screws missing.
13 Years Ago
well guns are the sad legacy of our manifest destiny that made this country
13 Years Ago
Yes sadly, it has played its parts in many history's bringing either joy for some but, sorrow for ot.. read moreYes sadly, it has played its parts in many history's bringing either joy for some but, sorrow for others.
Sounds just as if you were a patron of the Century 16 Theater that fateful morning in Aurora, Colorado...very chilling stuff. That last line is classic!
You know a 6 year old girl was killed in the middle of all that. And he has the audacity to sit there with his orange hair and say nothing, as if he owes nobody anything.
He who judges is never worthy of affording himself that role, and it's awfully sad that he who thinks he has a point to make, makes only a point to say nothing and mean nothing with his empty violence. And then let a child die for it. As if he were God watching as his son were nailed to the cross. And then straight into self-martyrdom, because he were so righteous.
This is so simply written but the complexities lie within the message you are sending out. And I like how you change and drift from very well written, written word/prose to become slightly more colloquial towards the end. It's as if you're digressing from the rational newspaper clipping documenting such an event to being there yourself, retelling the horror.
And I adore the ending. It's your angst and everybody elses, and sums up what is wrong with this capitalist, consumerist world where everybody has to be right, and pretty much, in this day and age, $12 will buy you more than you ever bargained for, and then could very well be the end of you. As if you never knew it was even coming.
We all pay for each others sins, and while most of us dont feel it straight away, you can bet your life on a 6 year old getting shot in the face because of that bad karma. The children always feel are wrath. Always.
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