New Religion (The Rorschach Test)

Collaboration with my man DatVirtgo. Hope you enjoy.

New RELIGION (the rorschach test) 

            

my body will fail internally                            my soul will forever live                                                                                                                          wandering...wandeing..                                                                                      but will it embrace eternity?

Plastic hooks keep my flesh from falling apart                                                                      As the vultures usher in a broken premise.  (I've been bleeding out patterns for days But still my body keeps me wandering away..)

not giving me the comfort of a swift silent exit left in a light of omniscience, faceless with its gaze onlooking the degradation, immaculate in its understanding 10 commandments tower above me... foreboding...eclipsing.

Barricaded inside of my faint inarticulate castle  I've been stripped to nothing besides the essence of a laconic tangibility  One that gives myself to the hissing gutural perception of a new religion  And one that gives a manifestation of a protoplasm lobotomy

the vulnerable ethereal state of mind emerges. the fear of understanding overshadowing concise thought. floating inches from the burning ground, so far from the white clouds. the lesser known dimensions of a crumbling cynical reality.

                Tonight I learned how angels breach their contracts

                           

                   This disjunction of my ambient personalities will send myself through the fissure

 

      

                            And everything will be so funny and beautiful on the way down

                         

                                                                  Everything will finally be perfect...

                                                                                            

                                                               Kept wandering... wandering... 

Author's Note

This is a collaboration between me and another poet who goes with the name DatVirgo ( http://www.writerscafe.org/phillipyorke ), we both have similar styles and we both thought a collab would turn out good. This poem is about the initial downfall of somebody who is going through depression, the rest is for you to interpret.

Reviews

[Marie]

I didn't get the impression of anybody going through depression...only wandering...and wondering.

[That_Girl]

This is incredible. Well done, both of you.

[afra]

wow .... i love it ...good job

[nigrum homonculus]

damn the music choice went well with this. completely smashed it!

[Coyote Poetry]

Quite a journey in the poem. I like the music also. When we fall. It is hard to stop. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Lily Mae]

What a mind blowing journey.. and a great collab.. You took my mind and soul on a trip...love it.. xo

"Tonight I learned how angels breach their contracts
This disjunction of my ambient personalities will send myself through the fissure".... love this..xo