Real Estate

I wanted to try something simple. No over complexed diction. Just humble.

Real Estate 

You see that house on the hill

you know I go there as I will

I've been there for 13 years, but still

Its not my home

I realize this is a temporary place

just my afterbirths hanging aftertaste 

giving me another year to just waste

planted in the carpet. 

Living in a cutout

Theres another house miles away

in there I will one day stay

and if I get my very own way

It will be my home

I realize this is a processing memory

lying on the axis of symmetry 

in the graph of the housing industry

on a tangent line

Living in a cutout

standing upright

Author's Note

Reviews

[The Refined Poet]

good write. the lyrical flow is well done.

[Yheela]

This got to me, somehow. The wanting to be somewhere else, to have another life. Very very good!

[Dayran]

In searching for a house we seek a home. Until then a cutout will have to do.

[Barbara Walker]

Love the first two lines in the second stanza and the entire fifth stanza, oh heck, the whole poem is outstanding!

[Olivia Marie]

I absolutely love it! I find all your stuff to be amazing, and this one is simpler, but it is still just as amazing :)

[MOON]

A house is not a home lovely write.

[Laura Maidah]

F**K YOU THIS IS SOOO F*****G GOOOOD F**K YOU OMGOSH F**K THIS Oh So SOOOOO GOOOOD

[Mockingbird]

i like the phrase 'i realize this is a processing memory.' shows how every moment is history before the next moment occurs and we are constantly processing memory." great job.

[Pax]

the simplicity and normalizes used of words is so refreshing to read from you.
You done a great job.

[Dark Tower]

Amazing read, so different to anything else, nothing to really compare it to, but it is truly a great piece.