taurus. INBORN; (Parts one and two)

taurus. INBORN; (Parts one and two)

A Poem by CH Archive
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Fuel & Pollen, part 4. One of my personal favorites.

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taurus. INBORN; Part One and Two.  


Part one. (feral)

Inborn. Mountain encased, still gloating the valley skid marks plastered on its hind, how sorry. Fur as scraggy as it is feral,

eyes closed, mouth open. 


Part two.  (Q.U.I.X.O.T.I.C)

Tangent lines define the quixotic bone marrow, bordering and connecting the dots. Young men look through wide lens, stroking its

vertebrae. Astrology glides over, the moaning and heaving ceases. Sol, and the uninvited, all  stay planted stationary. 

Mosaic wonderment, physics twinkle in its eyelids, and puts colour in its cheeks. Hydrogen atoms invert the; Animal 

on its hind. Eyes closed, mouth open. 



 

© 2012 CH Archive


Author's Note

CH Archive
A kinda juxtaposed view on the constellation Taurus.



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the images put in my mind's eye a picture of a poor animal who has been brutally run over. brings to mind the cruelty of humanity. it's funny how the constellation brought these images to your mind. very visual and shocking.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Pax
as everyone say unique and interesting read...its really well visualized. I like it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


More than meets the eye.

Posted 13 Years Ago


great write ....i love it

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very unique and interesting! Nicely done :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is very interesting, well portrayed

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very intriguing perspective. Wonderfully expressed.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was quite interesting. Well done! Thank you for including the photo, it really adds to the understanding of the poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A very interesting view. I like the strong description and the artwork. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wonderful job, unique choice of words, different yet suitable setup. Very well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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