Gyrate Around Axis

the world is splitting open at my feet, part seven.

Gyrate Around Axis. 

 

Placed on a swivel.

Twine wrapped, an uneasiness

in my stomach.

When I see your cheeks

fluttered ----- 

this cardinal girl. 

 

Picnic wrapped in

plaided dreamscape.

Sapphire sky------------------

unfold. 

In my arms I hold,

embryonic buzz

for you. 

My dreamt love. 

Prohibition

swindles our loins,

illusionary cannot 

feel…

But I feel.

I long.

I wonder.

I am. 

Yet I am not. With you

I might of been. 

Rain: cataract.

Ashen, coiled clouds,

whirlwinds swoon. 

  Soon, I'll be gone

blueness-trance, 

gyrate around axis. 

And you will be gone 

as well. Receding.

Lost abeyance. For us,

we walk for now. 

Until then. 

Author's Note

Reviews

[writing mojo]

great flow in your mechanical thoughts
never out versed I can tell you put as much
in your poems as you do in your artistic alternative expression...great piece

[Olivia Marie]

Absolutely Amazing. :) Love it.

[Pax]

passionate in great vission....
Great job!!!

[Kiari Sabon]

i really liked this writting keep up the work

[Barbara Walker]

The subtext here is amazing! Sometimes I read a poem that shouts out to me, but my words to review are inadequate. This is such a piece. Great poem!

[JaneIvany]

Still my favorite.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. I had to read a few times for the pleasure of the words.
"Rain: cataract.
Ashen, coiled clouds,
whirlwinds swoon. "
I love the use of words. Create vision and thoughts. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[moo to the world]

love your writings bud they are a stream of dreamy thoughts and feelings nice

[Steven]

Nice write, a buzz of sensual things, yet it feels, without experience somehow. The title an interesting concept.

"I might [have] been"

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Your poems never cease to amaze me. You write so beautifully and impressively and such awesome music taste to go along beautifully. PRODIGY!!! :D