I'm Having Trouble Sleeping.

"we evolved in a series of accidents." I think that I think to much.

Reviews

[Maria.F.T]

perfect

[writing mojo]

this peek a boo voodoo, shakes rattling bones, leaving hearts out of the equation and pointing faults, your back drops of dreams are brilliant...great poem

[daydreamer]

good intriguing write:)

[Barbara Walker]

I love that line- spine knotted like a shoelace! Superb! Balloons were tied tightly around your ankles, you said I was the only thing keeping you down-love hat imagery and metaphor!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great choice of words, perfect imagery!

[C.C. Marx]

WOW.....what else can i say except great job??

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My blood-less eyes stapled unto
the nearest tree trunk
ME: *holds stomach from getting sick* geez...

and my spine knotted like a shoelace.
ME: Oh my-

You know that feeling when you hear something or see something torturing with the body you then later are careful with it? Yeeeeeeeeeeeah, me right there...I'm not moving my spine lol but overall interesting poem. New, but still quite lovely :D

[Mockingbird]

sounds like waking dreams of you accosting a familiar face with whom this is the first time you're speaking.

[anxia]

good write!

[Edmund S. Obumba]

You bring out the realness behind Insomnia...I experience the same too only that we don't have coffee shops around..I love the song!