At that point, Stillness.

At that point, Stillness.

A Poem by CH Archive
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At that point, Stillness. 



At that point, Stillness.  

The window was deep 

In my chest, and --

I, strung from the tree. 


At that point, there wasn't --

a point left . A sharper cut longs

to be dull. And, if lullabies would 

dress. maybe I could waltz into a lull ?



- Cole Hayley, 2013.






you've got what you wanted

now whats in the briefcase? 

© 2013 CH Archive


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strangely captivating methinks

Posted 12 Years Ago


Mystery in essence...a modern thrill, truly lovely write, though I am boggled on how to respond. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Well for me the briefcase is the voice that has been silent for far too long...from the stillness that has been.. But hey,, who am I? lol...xo

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very poignant piece and well written; thought provoking...

Posted 12 Years Ago


he's taken a detour into your other-worldly life where symbolism proves that which may seem really is. and she says i've taken you out of your reality for a minute, what do you have for me in your bag. excellent poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


CH Archive

12 Years Ago

thanks! how come you havent posted anything new recetnly ? :(
Mockingbird

12 Years Ago

i give up. i just can't write anything. but thank you for thinking of me.
A brief moment and yet the one moment that may well define all else.

Posted 12 Years Ago


It's good. Nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is beautiful, to put it quite simply. I lack the words needed to express how truly beautiful this poem is. Wonderfully written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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a sleepy tone dancing in lullabies...they would dance in the rhythm in your dreams of soft whispers of silence... the last question in the end made me laugh...haha... i don't know it also made me wonder what's on the briefcase... great work my friend...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow all I can say is amazing. Such a beautiful piece. Keep it up.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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