Extraordinary

We know the truth. We found the square root.

Extraordinary

Walk me down the streets of my memory

Skipping stones across the lake 

Hanging off a wooden wharf 

Condescending each moment awake 

Synchronize and keep your eyes out for me

Make sure I don't wander to far away

The scenery is too surreal 

Its all leading me astray..

I can hear the sounds of my youth..

We found the square root..

We found the square root..

Author's Note

Ignore grammer problems.

Reviews

[Laura Maidah]

OMG> this is really fab. The only flaw is the explicit of the running "thesis". Classic show, don't tell case here:"The scenery is too surreal
Its all leading me astray.."

[olla]

well done

[Coyote Poetry]

A nice journey you led me with your thoughts. Journey into memories can make us find happiness or sadness. I did like the ending a lot.
"I can hear the sounds of my youth..

We found the square root..
We found the square root.."
Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Celestial Witch Child]

I like it, but to be honest it was just obscure enough to leave me confused... Also consider revising "condescending each moment awake."