Katasumi

A short 4 line poem.

Katasumi 

 The waves come in a melancholy perseverance

Neon signs blinking in and out of the nether

Shark fins brushing upon angel wings

The vacuum bleeding in and out with the weather 

Author's Note

Ignroe grammar problems.

Reviews

[Laura Maidah]

weather bleeding vacuum, my lover. wow. def a highlight of the morning. it's past midnight. let's call it morning. oh, the color and font looks immature, as does the word "nether". Everything else is pretty perfect.

[olla]

I like this one.. very much..

[Celestial Witch Child]

I do not understand...

[Coyote Poetry]

Katasumi is a good word. I did some research. The short poem told enough to create visions and thoughts. I like the photo also. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote