The Blue Roses

a short, unmetered piece with a simple rhyme scheme

Oh what a joy ~

red roses in bloom.

You hope and pray

they never see doom,

but every blue rose ...

'tis them you despise;

though watered with hate,

they continue to rise.

Author's Note

Constructive criticism is welcome. Please be honest in your reviews. I'd like to know how this piece impacted you (if it did so at all). Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

It's probably the feeling of being unwanted one feels when they see themselves as being uncared of while seeing the exact opposite treatment with others. I think you explained that very well by the example of red and blue roses..
This piece really made me think.
Well penned, William :)

[William Liston]

I'm glad I could make you think. Thank you for reviewing.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome. Always a pleasure reading your works :)

[Stacy Purvis]

As all artwork is welcome, and my opinion or bias bears no weight, the poem in itself is constructed with Flow and charisma, and still, a fair read.
Thank you for sharing.

[William Liston]

Thank you, but just know, you're welcome to share your honest opinions anytime.

[Stacy Purvis]

Likewise. xxx

[Najam Us Saher]

I liked the theme of this poem. Even when people ignore, hate and abandon us we rise up like a rose. That's a good thought when looked into a broader sense. I liked it.

[William Liston]

I agree with your words. I'm glad you enjoyed. Thank you for reviewing.

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺

[Cara]

this one gave the message to not give up no matter what the around you say, because what you are fighting for is worth it. thank you for sharing it

[William Liston]

That is certainly a theme of this poem. Thank you for your kind words.