She is...

A small dose...

She is…
A Poem by Colton Warr

I am saved,
As shock and electricity sizzle through my veins
A furious flow of a feeling so new to me
She is glowing like lights in the city

I am enamored,
As I look at her, butterflies prevent proper use of grammar
A star in the sky entrancing my gaze
She is the cause of all of my happy days

I am overwhelmed,
As I am abducted and taken to her realm
A different planet I am on, yet scared I am not
She is a creation in which beauty she is infinitely beyond

I am happy,
As simple as that may be, I am happy
A search thought to be lost, yet here I am found
She is a wild flower to which I am bound

She is a ray from the sun, never to be brought down
She is a queen with a diamond crown
She is a hurricane crashing into me
She is the clearest and most dazzling of waves from an endless sea
She is outer space and all things breath taking and unknown
She is perfect…I want to be the reason she will never be alone
She is a thief in the night, stealing my heart, perhaps
She is, she is…but I don’t want it back.

Reviews

[Rocans (Asher)]

Nice poem. Simple but you got your point across in a sufficiently poetic fashion. I enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.

[Colton Warr]

I'm glad you enjoyed this! Thanks for the kind words and thanks for reading!

[Christopher Robin]

Right on target. Good structure, good verse, almost perfect rhymes.

Hard to fault,

-Robin

[Colton Warr]

I'm very happy that you enjoyed this one! Thanks for stopping by and reading!

[Kieta!]

'She is a thief in the night, stealing my heart, perhaps
She is, she is…but I don’t want it back.'

I think that's my favorite part of the whole ting!!! So beautiful and romantic!!! Great job!!!!! :) :)

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reading!

[ayesha gupta]

nice and romantic. you described 'her' amazingly. i loved reading it.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you! I am glad you liked it! I appreciate you stopping by and reading!

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Wow, this poem is amazing. I loved reading this beautiful piece. :-)

Kaze~

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed! Thanks for stopping by and reading!

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :)

[Dean]

Check out my poem, "She" I am reminded of it, here.

[Colton Warr]

I looked at your poem, very spectacular I must say, sir! Yours reminds me of this as well! Thanks for reading!

[Alma W. Reis]

"A search thought to be lost, yet here I am found" is a true and simple way of describing the journey. The worthy reward, which comes along is wonderfully described.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much! I am glad you enjoyed this piece! Thanks for taking the time out and reading, I appreciate it!

[Sami Khalil]

Very good and with an entrancing value. Thank you for sharing with us...:)..........

[Colton Warr]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).............

[Miles W.]

Very beautiful! This poem really takes the reader on a journey into something beautiful, and still keeps the focus on where it should be, on the person being described. Well done sir. Great write.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it and I am glad this was able to take you on a journey. That's exactly what I wanted while keeping the focus on her. Thanks for stopping by and reading!

[kclyaine]

I'm much more impressed on how many views you have and you being able to reply on each person who reviewed. I agree to them, this poem is really sweet. It really shows how much you love her.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much! I do try and make it a point to at the very least say thank you to everyone who is kind enough to read and leave a review. The love and support on this poem has been astounding. I am blown away. I am glad you can see the love and emotion here. Thanks for the kind words and thanks for reading!