She is...

A small dose...

She is…
A Poem by Colton Warr

I am saved,
As shock and electricity sizzle through my veins
A furious flow of a feeling so new to me
She is glowing like lights in the city

I am enamored,
As I look at her, butterflies prevent proper use of grammar
A star in the sky entrancing my gaze
She is the cause of all of my happy days

I am overwhelmed,
As I am abducted and taken to her realm
A different planet I am on, yet scared I am not
She is a creation in which beauty she is infinitely beyond

I am happy,
As simple as that may be, I am happy
A search thought to be lost, yet here I am found
She is a wild flower to which I am bound

She is a ray from the sun, never to be brought down
She is a queen with a diamond crown
She is a hurricane crashing into me
She is the clearest and most dazzling of waves from an endless sea
She is outer space and all things breath taking and unknown
She is perfect…I want to be the reason she will never be alone
She is a thief in the night, stealing my heart, perhaps
She is, she is…but I don’t want it back.

Reviews

[Kyline Freed]

this is awesome! The voice in it comes through so much!

[Colton Warr]

I appreciate you stopping by and reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you!

[Gamitsuki]

LoVely......you must publish it somewhere else also......i liked it...ReaLLy.......

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much! I appreciate you saying that! Perhaps I will look into publishing it somewhere else. I am glad you enjoyed it!

[Kasey Miriam]

I really enjoyed this poem. The line breaks are fantastic and the emotion in the poem is truely wonderful. With what I have read from you so far I say, Amazing writing keep it up! I'll be back to read more and continue to leave reviews as I find the time.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much for stopping by and for the positive encouragement and feedback! I appreciate you saying what you said and I appreciate you reading and saying you will keep reading! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem!

[S]

This would sound cliche but it's really romantic. I think every girl secretly wants to be worshiped (I assume) :)S

[Colton Warr]

Haha I agree with that, I too think every girl wants to be worshiped! Thanks for reading, I am glad you enjoyed!

[S]

You're welcome :)S

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

Very heart felt. It's a touching piece, and I bet many women had loved reading this. The last verse really sums up the poem pretty well, and the last line really hits a baseball being thrown at homerun.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, my friend! Your kind words are encouraging! Thanks for reading!

[Edward Lancheister]

good personality imagery with a good flow, i guess these words would be good song :)

thanks for share

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much! That's cool that you think it could be a song! Perhaps I will see if I can turn it into one? Thanks for reading!

[Edward Lancheister]

look forward to hear this poem into song :)

[Steve L.]

Wow!! This one blew me away!! Amazing imagery. True love is difficult to put into words, but you were up for the task.

[Steve L.]

Wow!! This one blew me away!! Amazing imagery. True love is difficult to put into words, but you were up for the task.

[Colton Warr]

I agree with that! But at the same time, I truly found this easy to write. As if the words ran to me, and wanted to be written. All I had to do was think of her. Thanks for reading!

[Steve L.]

Then she is a luck woman!

[Kat Leila]

as simple as may be, I am happy...
and that line sums it up!

Perfect my friend!

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much!! I am glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reading!

[C. Rose]

Favorite lines "prevent proper use of grammar", "all things breathtaking and unknown"
The twist at the end is subtle and opens up a whole other set of questions.
I find it intriguing that you chose to include only the positive descriptions, definitely leaves the reader curious.

Thanks for sharing.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much for stopping by and reading!! I'm glad you enjoyed!