My Precious One

Tell me the things

I need to know

Sights I should see,

Before the final blow

Mirror my feelings,

The ones I hid from you

Truest emotion,

True as the sky is blue

Mark me where I stand,

And erase all my doubs

Mark me where I stand,

On every spot that I count

Show you my ambition,

Naked, raw, and full

And stay with me, my precious one,

My slowly darkening jewel.

Author's Note

Thoughts coagulated into words

Reviews

[Natalie.]

The rhythm in this one is so smooth...and the last line is like a soft Bam! =)