Dream Catcher

Dream catcher Dream catcher

Catch me a dream.

Take me and break me,

Rip me apart at my seams.

Bring forth another smile,

Another laugh from my throat.

Show me into nothingness,

Throw me in and let me float.

Don't make me remember

The hard times gone by.

Wrap me within your feathers

And teach me to fly.

Capture my love,

And lend me your light.

Take me to places

Where colors are bright.

Enshroud me in time,

And scatter my soul.

So that this feeling may stay,

And never grow old.

I fall upwards to the bottom,

And vanish in steam.

Dream catcher Dream catcher,

Catch me a dream.

Author's Note

For the one I call my dream catcher.

Reviews

[Q]

Very good, The first lines make me think that this was going to be a song. The good dreams are always the best ones to remember, though the mind chooses which dreams to remember, good or bad. You may not know why, but there is always a reason behind it.

Cool Poem.

[Natalie.]

OHMYF*** I LOOOOVE IT!!!! hold on! must go shout its praises from the rooftops! * leaps up from chair in IDLA and climbs monkey-style out of the window*

[Sarah]

ahh this is beautiful

[Elaine]

I loved reading this i love the flow of it all. very nice and beautiful piece. nice job. keep writing.

[Haifa]

It's great. I like 2 lines for the most are "Don't make me remember,The hard times gone by." Because I don't want to remember those hard times as well. Very well done

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is fantastic, i adore this 100/100