Beat This Dream

At a point where i don't know if I should give up or keep trying

I hear you,
sweet whispers in my ear
that send shivers down my spine;
I'm coming unglued

But yet it doesn't seem right...
What if it's all a dream?
I hope it's not as it seems
Oh save me from this plight

Mind turning,
this never ending feeling.
Heart churning,
always frantically beating.

I want to soar
Not feel the ground under my feet.
But I'm stuck in reality,
never being free.

It's too late for you
Words falling on deaf ears.
Maybe another day,
when my heart finds things true

Reviews

[MelissaFig]

I love the emotions.

[Alicia™]

I can relate so much to this. Awesome job. I loved it... However, I think you need to work on the flow a little bit. Or maybe it's just the way I'm reading it. I'm not sure, but I feel like the flow is just off.