This Twist of Fate

F**k them,

these tears that I’ve cried

all because of you

& your stupid lies.

Saying that you cared,

along with fancy words and laughs shared,

you had me unprepared

for this sudden twist of fate.

 

Author's Note

I was thinking of adding more to it, but after talking with a friend, I think it's ok to stop here. What do you think?

Reviews

[A]

I like it! If you added more I can see this being a great song. That was the first thing that came to my mind. But it is a great, short poem...gets your point across clearly. Very great piece :)

[Undying Glory]

short, sweet and impactful. they always say short works are more impactful than long works and i think that's true here. great