Beauty

All women are beautiful <3; Inspired by my Best friend.

Gaze at her,

those beautiful eyes of blue,

her hair of pure gold,

and how her smile caresses the world.

 

I can see her beauty,

In and out,

Things unseen,

The pain behind the beauty,

 

I saw right through her,

I saw the scars,

I saw the dried up tears upon her face,

I saw the real you.

 

It wasn't because of your make-up,

It wasn't because of your clothes,

It wasn't because of your hair,

It was because of your natural beauty.

 

-- You're the most beautiful thing in the world.

Don't ever doubt yourself.

Reviews

[Eternally Elemental]

Yes! Natural beauty!

The heart is what truly shows what we are. Inspired by a friend, I'm sure, but you are also beautiful for writing this.
Her face caresses the world, what a beautiful line. It shows that she has significance in this word, that she means something special.
What a beautiful poem, with an inspiring message. Very uplifting and a pleasure to read. Young people need to support each other in this way. We need to show that we care for each other more often, because society needs it.
Wonderful piece, great way to begin your journey here. Welcome Lulabelle.

This was a true pleasure to read and very inspiring.

[Irwin]

Some lovely phrasing here. I like the sentiments, pity everybody can't see beyond the obvious.

[Taylor_Anne_xoxo]

wow that really is beautiful...very well put...i love how honest and stripped it makes the emotions...please, do keep writing

[Holly]

Wow, welcome to writer's cafe. Quite the ode as if a lover singing his praises.