remembrance

in loving memory of someone special.....

In you I can truly tell the height of my weakness and strength, I can see the need to live and improve to be a better man; I see the countless reasons not to allow my depressions becloud my sense of reasoning, if only I could make a wish, that would have been life without end. I feel quite nostalgic anytime I think of you, the memory of you has always put me in a terrible sense of desolation, I won’t despair because he who gives life in perpetuity is never asleep. Tears are scarce on my cheek due to the constant condition of my heart only my heart can’t lie due to its nature, my mouth lies, putting an unimaginable expression which might eventually impress, my face wears a fake smile only to put things right, for the first time in forever I now comprehend what love between the living and the dead feels like, I will record my experience on a paper with a pen, waiting till the day I’ll have a suitable moment with you, and until that day my write up has no topic.

Author's Note

any grammatical error?

Reviews

[Tom Aubin]

I am not the right person to point out grammatical errors but I enjoyed reading your text, especially the last part of the last sentence:
"I will record my experience on a paper with a pen, waiting till the day I’ll have a suitable moment with you, and until that day my write up has no topic."
Good job!

[Mr confido]

Thanks a lot Tom Aubin, I truly appreciate.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i have recorded experiences on paper which deal with a few people who are gone from my life...a couple just by separation and some who left this world much too early---there is a sadness but also the feeling that i will see them all again someday, somewhere....
a moving write.
j.