Solitary Linder

Solitary Linder

 

Blistering winds the twilight’s dawning

Blew grains of salt dirt round my face

The sea has vanished and left this dust

I walk upon with wonder’s lust longing

To feel its touch but only rusty ships

Upon this forgotten promise land

 

Sorrows and desire’s infinite call

Crossing my heart I feel the lour of

The deep where we walked upon the

Shores soft our feet would sink into

Sand but mere traces of where we’d

Stand breathing in to taste the ocean

 

Upon our lips reeling in its essence

Falling into the deep we reveled

Soaring in lofty glorious passions

Zeal so torturous and strong

Tall my linder gleaming over

Lost faults beaming in ecstasy

 

Rising like the ocean pushing us

Locked by depths of ardor such

Savored our tongues longing fully

Stained by hungers for those days

Of our sweet escapes now barrow

 

Walk along our enduring aromas

Rafting our lighthouse beacons

Memories of fattened shadows

Bundle lingering loves hallow

Author's Note

Linder: A rare, unique sparkling glimmering rock formation; Lour: Dark or Darkness
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Reviews

[armin]

great metaphors Dale and so romantic also. I loved these lines,

Crossing my heart I feel the lour of
The deep where we walked upon the
Shores soft our feet would sink into
Sand but mere traces of where we’d
Stand breathing in to taste the ocean

Wonders the words Dale, it's so beautiful.
You captured the scenes very well.
I loved it. Thankyou.

armin. ....

[Sami Khalil]

"The sea has vanished and left this dust
I walk upon with wonder’s lust longing
To feel its touch but only rusty ships
Upon this forgotten promise land"

[Sami Khalil]

"Upon our lips reeling in its essence
Falling into the deep we reveled
Reeling in lofty glorious passions
Zeal so torturous and strong"

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Amazing is your pen and your power of expressions. Nothing like finding our promised fates and lands. Excellent...:)..............

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Measured, and extremely reasoned and articulated.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Beautiful poem, Dale, rich choice of words, great imagery, in one word...excellent. Thanks for sharing this poem. :) Rudi

[BL]

I like it the way it is, it feels naturally formed like the Scene you describe.

[Daisy]

it's wonderful
It gives me feeling of cool wind blowing...... Awesome

[anne]

beautiful my dear..
Blistering winds the twilight’s dawning...
To feel its touch but only rusty ships
Upon this forgotten promise land....
Rising like the ocean pushing us
Locked by depths of ardor such
Savored our tongues longing fully
Stained by hungers for those days
Of our sweet escapes now barrow...loved these lines...:))