A Night Rainbow, The Moonbow

Waiting for Love

Night’s Rainbow, The MoonBow

A rainbow glistened in a dark sky

Spreading through starlight

Thunder roared as lonely clouds

Ripped into the atmosphere

Upon my wave of hopefulness

I search for you my dear

 

Miraculous Lights twinkle

Gleaming brilliant colors flow

Into my pleading heart and soul

I’ll wait forever, never to let go

Many years and many days

But nothing changed your plane

 

I danced for sweet rain to bring

You near, for the rare Moon’s

Bow to appear �" now I see

It’s half ring hidden in my memory

 

A hundred different ways to collide

With my propensity to laugh and cry

Waiting for drops to take my pain

Pretending my meek measures would

Make you smile, but life’s too short

For lonely clouds these parched days

 

Longing I asked the moon to come down low,

But the hellcats of hullabaloo said “oh no no”

You need only a mist to see his rainbow

Tenderly embrace our dark paradise

It calls for love’s blissful guise

Author's Note

Moonbow rises at night, rarity: Just thoughts...Thanks in advance for reading/any reviews guidance are always appreciated. I made changes....like this version better. Hope you do...A Moonbow is a rare phenomenon

Reviews

[armin]

Rainbow produced by the reflection of the moonlight, Moonbow, certainly a rare but must be a beautiful natural phenomenon.
Loved your imagery, the first 10 lines are my favourite, especially the given part is more than beautiful,

Thunder roared as lonely clouds
Ripped into the atmosphere
Upon my wave of hopefulness
I search for you my dear.

Well done, dear Dale.

armin. ...

[SmittyJas]

Lovely written many charming words to make me love and understand what was happening on a very special night that brings such beautiful poetry to light. Your words are very descriptive in a pleasant way.

[Daisy]

wow such beautifulll... took me to some other world.... wonderful

[Richard]

this is really an imaginative piece

[Charly Priest]

Hello, I´m a novice writer and new to writerscafe.
What can I say, I found this poem beautiful. Don´t know much about structure and the rest, but sounds right to me this poem. A bit melancholic which I found very nice and I specially liked the last eleven lines.
It gets to you, or better said to me a reader. Wonderful reading you.

[marcus]

A moonbow, sounds lovely! I liked this .

[SleeplessVolcano]

Life is indeed too short for lonely clouds......inspirational writing! I love moonbows too.....have been studying stars lately and it is amazing how creative early stargazers were with their descriptions.....I guess we would also have been able to do this without our countless time-consuming screens.......ahhhh....the universe as my screen.....that sounds like a topic for a poem....:)

[JMKane117]

That's a very vivid combination of words. Especially hellcats of hullabaloo. It's raining where I am. Now I hope I see a moonbow!

[emmajoy]

' I danced for sweet rain to bring -- You near, for the rare Moon’s -- Bow to appear " now I see -- It’s half ring hidden in my memory.. '

To unite or tangle love with such a beautiful sight as the moonbow is just beautiful and, even more, quite rare. That makes this poem even more special that most about love.

You've created a happy poem, as if you've produced your own joy, your own way of feeling and seeing LOVE.

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

I love the night and the moon....a visually descriptive pen!

[MAC]

a beautiful depiction of a moonbow. a very clever write filled with originality. loved it!